Hi all !!
This is of one my poem or rather say song lyrics, i wrote back 3-4yrs ago. I found my diary today so thought why not update you all with my so called stupid obsession of writing all -ve thoughts back then. So please don't point out any rhyming/grammar mistakes, it was just an emotional overflow that time LOL
Cast out like
rain,
Cast me out some
pain.
Have had already
enough,
Can have a bit
like insane.
Sparked into
life as if a blessing,
Works like a
poison and keeps stretching.
Life is so much
more of it
I never thought,
i guess i never thought
But now life is
so full of it, I would never want it, oh no no.. never want it
Still remember
myself two years ago.
Who i was? How i was? No matter, why i was?
Love kindled out
of me for every single thing
And now..!! Am a
total disaster full of hate for everybody.
Just one
question, who did this to me?
Why I’m not supposed
to be me?
Where is love to
see?
I know, know
that.
Its gonna be
somewhere.. someday.
Will again
happen to me...
And now after 3-4yrs and more, i am a completely different and more of a happy person because i've learnt a lot in past and don't get hurt easily.. I've put it up especially for Zara bhabs from The World Through My retina, because i promised her one day i will put up what i wrote
I don't write anymore, but have written a lot in past, that i may put up a few of my so called lyrics in future, not sure.

Godbless !!
O gosh..amazing poetry..You are so good at this..you should begin it all over again Upasana...
ReplyDeleteYes Harshita.. she shud..provided they are only positive n happy thoughts..
ReplyDeleteMy babe is much more than sum stupif negativity.. I din knew this side of U..upsi! Guess v have hidden skills v din even knew dat xist in Us.
Fab baby...Fab! *claps*.. Luvyaa ..mwaaah :* <3
I love this sweets....seriousy..its straight from the heart....i've been there and I can relate to the entire poen word t word baby...
ReplyDeleteM glad u got out of that place and became who u r tday...Luv u soo much for posting this Upsi...Don't stop ;)
Thanku bhabs :-* i'm happy m out of that place, but not much open to anyone now lol :D :D i lou u toooo :* hmmm i dnt write anymore :(
ReplyDeleteThanku harshu :) getting a compliment like this from u is definitely worth :D :D :* i dnt write nymore dear.. :)
ReplyDeletelol :P i dnt write anymore ricky :P i was in two minds whether to post this one or not cz its quite -ve :( but then talent is talent lol :D :D :D
ReplyDeleteThankkuuuu :* lubju toooo <3
Nice poem upiiiii....I can understand the feelings behind this poem....nd I guess many people can relate this poem with their lives...as it's related to my life too...bt Thank God that time has passed and Today m nd we are happy people... :D
ReplyDeleteexactly prabh :D :D :D love and support really helps to pull out one from depression <3 :) i'm happy i hv u my sis for forever
ReplyDeleteit was awesome! i ended up making a tune to fit in these lyrics :P :P this is straight from the heart upsi and it is wonderful :) :* would love to read more of your writings!! hahaha.. i still remember the poems i wrote for vincent.. he still has all the bits and pieces of paper i gave him :D :D
ReplyDeleteu did ? :D :D :D aawww that so sweet of u :D :D i however never wrote for anyone :-/
ReplyDeleteArey if you could write so good then , so will you be able to do now..describe the colourful shades of your life now :) they'll still be straight from the heart...I am already a big fan of yours...Keep coming up with the creative writer in you :) Think about it once again
ReplyDeletebeautiful piece..loved reading it .its gonna be somewhere some day :)
ReplyDeleteThanku Ana :) .. yeah its definitely gonna b somewhere some day ;)
ReplyDeletehaha :D harshu i ws in some phase that time.. extremely burdened then, so writing all this was a way for me to feel relaxed.. i'm in a happy or say contented and stable phase now.. dnt feel like writing lol :P i will write if something makes me write swty :) pakkkaa
ReplyDeletebeautifully written
ReplyDeleteThanku vanu :)
ReplyDeletewhen THE Prince Charming comes im sure your interest in writing will revive! :)
ReplyDeletemaybe :P <3
ReplyDeleteVery meaningful poem dear! I am glad you have changed for the good!
ReplyDeleteThanku taps :)
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